{"id":35,"date":"2013-08-21T23:02:51","date_gmt":"2013-08-21T23:02:51","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/torawriting.com\/sandbox\/?p=35"},"modified":"2020-10-06T15:22:43","modified_gmt":"2020-10-06T22:22:43","slug":"writing-powerfully","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/torawriting.com\/sandbox\/writing-powerfully\/","title":{"rendered":"Writing Powerfully"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">Updated: 6 October 2020<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b><a href=\"https:\/\/torawriting.com\/sandbox\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/08\/LitPencil.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-75 alignleft\" title=\"Powerful Writing\" src=\"https:\/\/torawriting.com\/sandbox\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/08\/LitPencil-217x300.jpg\" alt=\"LitPencil\" width=\"217\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/torawriting.com\/sandbox\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/08\/LitPencil-217x300.jpg 217w, https:\/\/torawriting.com\/sandbox\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/08\/LitPencil.jpg 652w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 217px) 100vw, 217px\" \/><\/a><\/b><span style=\"color: #006633;\"><strong>Writing powerfully is not the same as having a powerful message<\/strong>.<\/span> Instead, it is conveying a message \u2013 any message \u2013 in a way that everyone who should understand it does understand it.<\/p>\n<h2>Power Rule #1<\/h2>\n<p>The first rule is to <span style=\"color: #006633;\"><strong>Be Clear<\/strong><\/span>. Do not use technical language unless you know your audience understands it. As an example from my previous life as a Mining Engineer: <a href=\"http:\/\/dictionary.reference.com\/browse\/hydrophobic?s=t\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">hydrophobic<\/a>. If I were writing a paper for a group of mineral process engineers (the people who separate the dirt for the valuable stuff) I could use that word and everyone would know exactly what I meant. For the rest of the world, hydrophobic is a property of something that repels water \u2013 like oil.<\/p>\n<p>The same is true for words with many syllables. You may have an excellent vocabulary, and your readers my have excellent vocabularies, but that does not mean that you have the <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">same<\/span> excellent vocabulary. <strong><span style=\"color: #006633;\">Avoid confusion, use the simple words.<\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<h2>Power Rule #2<\/h2>\n<p>Next, when writing in Word, <span style=\"color: #006633;\"><strong>use the Grammar Check<\/strong><\/span>. And turn on some of the style checks \u2013 especially the check for passive voice. Unfortunately, Word does not make suggestions for removing passive voice, but you will become a better writer figuring it out with each case. The problem with avoiding the passive voice is that you (or, at least I) can end up writing lots of fragments. Check for fragments, but do not be afraid of them. If your previous sentence implies the subject, and if you are not confusing your reader, an occasional fragment is fine.<\/p>\n<p>The other style to check is long sentences. When a sentence is long because of a list, keep said list short, use semicolons, or replace it with bullet points.<\/p>\n<p>If you&#8217;re not writing in Word &#8211; or even if you are &#8211; the free version of <a href=\"http:\/\/grammarly.com\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Grammarly<\/a> does a decent spell and grammar check. (We have a totally different writing style though.)<\/p>\n<h2>Power Rule #3<\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"color: #006633;\"><strong>Get To The Point.<\/strong><\/span> I am not talking about poetry here; I am talking about conveying a message understandably. So, skip the flowery language, extra words, and compound sentences. Say what needs saying and stop. But, do not be rude either.<\/p>\n<p>Following these points does not guarantee powerful writing, but not following them will make your document hard to read.<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; Lorrie Nicoles<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Updated: 6 October 2020 Writing powerfully is not the same as having a powerful message. Instead, it is conveying a message \u2013 any message \u2013 in a way that everyone who should understand it does understand it. Power Rule #1 The first rule is to Be Clear. 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